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Bethany had enough, she couldn't stand the incompetence and bureaucracy of the police department. She had thought of quitting and making her own private  firm for a while, but after continously seeing news of innocents getting killed due t street gangs and psychopaths, she realize she needed to do something more, she needed to fight crime.

Bethany concocted a plan, but she needed money to make it work. Then a thought came to mind, she could gain access to the money if she finally agreed to work for her dad. First thing first, she made her letter, explaining why she quit. She said she was going to start her own firm and work for her dad.

Bethany then finally after years agreed to administer the family business, but on one condition, that her father would help make her own detective office, so that on her spare time she could pursue her passion. Before going further into this story, it should be noted for future references, that the Hunter family are a renown family, owners of Hunter Trade Company, which dedicates to the import and export of goods. Bethany agreed to become a member of the executive board.

What her father didn't know, was the second part of her plan. By gaining her father's favor, she gain access to quite a bit of wealth herself. She was given enough money to make the office and then some. With the money given to her, she began to buy combat equipment such as tranquilizer guns, stun grenades, tazer guns, etc. She redesigned one of the rooms of her appartment to stash this equipment. Why would an executive detective need this gear? Quite simple, the second part of her plan consisted on becoming a vigilante, what the city desperately need.

Lucky for her,they would never suspect her as such. Very few people knew she was quite good at hand to hand combat. She had trained in the arts of self defense during her college years. She was quite skilled with gun, but opted to carry two tranquilizer guns, as she had decided to have a no kill philosophy.

This seemed crazy, she felt like she was becoming some sort of Batman, but for once, she felt she was doing something right. She began to design her costume, which was made out of latex, she liked it as it would make her butt look sexy. Gotta look sexy while fighting crime.

She reflected for a moment, if her friend Jessica saw her, she would be proud. She has come along way from being that shy girl afraid to be naked in front of someone to this soon to be femne fatale.

It was done. After a few weeks of designing, the costume and everything was ready.

On the other hand her detective office was prepared as well. Her plan was coming to fruition, she would use her detective skills to track leads and then she would deliver justice as a vigilante.

And her plan came to fruition just in time. As weeks passed crime seemed to escalate,now that she have don her costume, it was time to put a stop to it.
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DreamWoman Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
loved!!! how do you want her? I wanna mean, will she act or fight like some hero already knew? like Batman or Black Widow... who knows something with more gunshots like Sheva Alomar? xD
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:iconbethanyhunter:
She's more like Batman, because she doesn't kill and has cool gadgets :D, but she is relies on stealth and flattery so she's kinda like Black Widow too ^_^!
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DreamWoman Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
COOl xD
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:iconbethanyhunter:
Thanks so much ^_^
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moose213 Dec 30, 2012
i love it! i just started writing and this is a very good example of a perfect story. brilliant!
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:iconbethanyhunter:
Thank you so much for your comment. I really appreciate it ^_^!
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:iconwestcpw:
you got a good tail there

I had a story idea for a homicide cop named Angela Hunter - got involved in supernatural stuff - now playing her in World of Darkness

Keep up the writing. You publish anything on Smashwords ?
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:iconbethanyhunter:
That's pretty cool! They even share last names ^_^! Thanks a lot for the feedback :)
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:iconthedemonprosecutor:
((...Well atleast Edgey won't be walking in at awkward moments anymore XD))
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:iconbethanyhunter:
((Poor Edgy! This does not mean we can't no longer rp though D:! I'm pretty sure we can make more interesting rps now ^_^!))
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